Divergent Trilogy
Divergent: Four Stars
out of Five
Insurgent: Three and Half Stars out of Five
Allegiant: Three Stars out of Five
Author: Virginia Roth
I recently reviewed Divergent the book and compared it to
Divergent the movie. In this review, I continue the Divergent trilogy series
book review. Divergent was published
in 2011, with Insurgent following one
year later in 2012, and the concluding book Allegiant
in 2013. The three books describe a post-apocalyptic world that is centered on
Chicago some seven or more generations after a catastrophic war. The primary protagonists
are sixteen year old Beatrice/Tris and her eighteen year old boyfriend,
Four/Tobias. They live in a society that has been split into five factions that
emphasize a single personality trait: Abnegation (selflessness), Amity
(kindness), Candor (honesty), Dauntless (bravery), and Erudite (intelligence).
In book one, we are introduced to the world Beatrice and Four
live in. At sixteen, each member of a faction must choose the faction in which
they will live out their lives. Beatrice and her brother Caleb separated by
less than a year in age make a choice that takes them away from their birth
faction of Abnegation. This very clever plot point by author Virginia Roth
creates a situation where Beatrice’s and Caleb’s parents must demonstrate their
love and understanding as regards their children’s choices; it is particularly
astute writing as Roth later brings the Four character into the story and
discusses his choice to move to a new faction wherein his choice was based on a
stark contrast, his desire to flee an abusive father. Such clever uses of plot
and character points are used by Roth throughout the three books to discuss
behavioral traits that she appears to believe are important aspects of any society.
Divergent
continues in a clever (if somewhat formulaic) manner by following Beatrice’s
(now renamed Tris) initiation into the Dauntless faction. Here she learns firsthand
their primary focus on bravery and meets her initiation instructor and boyfriend-to-be,
Four (aka Tobias). Book one describes a pending plot by Erudite’s leader
Jeanine against Abnegation that Four and Tris confound, but do not completely
defeat. In book two, Insurgent, the
plot by Jeanine continues and is ultimately thoroughly defeated by Tris, Four
and their new colleagues, the Factionless; a group that is led by Four’s mother,
Evelyn. Book three, Allegiant
describes a rising resistance movement against the now oppressive Evelyn and
the Factionless. The rebel army (the Allegiant) is led in part by Four’s other
parent, his abusive father Marcus. Tris and Four leave Chicago as their part in
the resistance movement requires them to seek information from those outside of
Chicago. In their interactions with those outside of the city (The Bureau),
they learn the true history of Chicago and its inhabitants. This history includes
revelations that convince Tris and Four that further revolution is needed, this
time against the Bureau and their concept of who is “genetically pure” and who
is “gene-damaged”.
All three books are well crafted from several technical
points of view. In particular, the plot pacing is great in book one, while the characters
are so well described in books one and two that it is easy to become captivated
or repulsed by several of the central characters. However, while the plot is
well paced and logical in Divergent,
the first book in the trilogy, it starts to suffer in books two and three. In
book two, Insurgent, the plot becomes
repetitious and the story-telling is damaged on several occasions with scene
segues that seem like editorial miscues. However, my biggest complaint with the
trilogy is with an absence of character development.
Consider the case of Tobias. The story alludes in the first
book to his abuse as a child and then better defines his backstory in book
three. Roth goes so far in book three to use the first person narrative with
both Tris and Tobias (after using it only for Tris in books one and two);
presumably to better focus on Tobias. I do not find this textual technique to
be useful and, in fact, the use of Tobias as the narrator suffered from a poor delineation
of his voice from that of Tris’ voice. I often had to re-read some sentences to
verify who was speaking, their voices were so similar. But complaints about narrative
voice aside, Tobias’ character could have provided a great opportunity for Roth
to show Tobias’ evolution as he came to know himself in his new faction of
Dauntless (after leaving his father in Abnegation): how his competition and
differentiation from the rival Dauntless leader Eric drove him deeper into the
Dauntless mindset, and then again as his
relationship with Tris and her driven personality began to interact. Instead,
Four’s true personality, one developed in a household ruled by fear, is not even
very well defined until very late in book three. Instead, his Dauntless-defined
personality of fearless bravery is solely on display throughout books one, two
and most of three. There is virtually no change observable in his character,
merely a recitation of the events that would have defined a real person. A similar case could be made for Tris. She advances the plot throughout all three books, but her character remains virtually untouched by all the events she lives through. With the potential exception of Tobias' mother Evelyn, none of the characters ever seem affected by their circumstances such they seem to grow or change in any manner.
That a novel designed for the Young Adult audience follows
many of the YA genre themes and plot conventions, and lacks characters that resemble actual people by having those
characters growing with the plot’s influence on them, does not come as a great
surprise. But in a novel series that showed such promise in the first book, it
does come as a disappointment.
Footnote: It seems
like Roth recognized her missed opportunity with Tobias late in book three and
started to better show the forces that shaped the youthful Tobias. In addition,
Roth has since the publication of Allegiant published a fourth book that consists of short stories revolving
around Tobias/Four. I wonder if she too began
to see him as a character with greater potential and an additional opportunity to
better tell the Divergent tale.